we're intertwined, yet distant
as you breathe out and kiss me
the taste of hotel mints attempting to cover your cigar fills
misleading substance
solely sensory pleasure
this feeling keeps my mind from falling to the future
metaphysics
appearance and reality
what is? and what is what i want it to be?
if i could exist only my own apperception
i could be fully sane
and would come to realize
your comparable to a relationship with the weather
surely fleeting and unsure of itself
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Wow. That first stanza was amazing. Every word in it is so powerful, and perfectly chosen.
Plus, Metaphysics is one of my top five favorite words, so I think its awesome you incorporated that in the third stanza.
1) indubitably
2) falafel
3) Autumn
4) Metaphysics
5) Bastard
and I hate to put that last one on there, but it's just such a great word. When you say any of those words you just feel accomplished, and content.
haha, I just realized, is it totally nerdy that I keep a list of my favorite words?
I honestly have thought about writing a book, but I've had different ideas. The one that keeps coming back in different forms is a book written like a journal, because a journal format can give way to completely personal thoughts, and give way to more advanced writing styles.
but as for the words, you should totally make a list of your top five favorites. Post them on this blog!
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